good piece plade topic but better than ive seen it on here
vocab of course was good for both same with strucutre
flow could have been better but not bad at all
valors peice was worded great there were alot of places where if you would have worded it wrong it would have been ass but u didnt so props
atticus's piece was more o nthe storm thatn the pp,l so you both touched on diferent topics which i like
9/10

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