The rhyming and the overall pace and flow of the piece was the best aspect in my opinion. By just reading it, I felt as if I was spitting inside my mind you know. Very fluent pace in the piece.

But besides that you managed to hold it down vocabulary-wise as well, same goes for your imagery. You use vague, poetic images which I definitely like. Emotion is there too but it's not so much of an emotional piece you know but still you added it to it.

Solid stuff

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