Voted For: one mic

One Mic

Well,you had some decent punches.I Liked your first bar,with the conflict nameplay.The restaurant line was wack though.Seemed to complex.I understand what you were saying,but still...just get to the point with your punches.Aviod explaining your punches in the future.And don't make punches on avys anymore,their just boring nowadays.

Conflict


Ok,you had a choppy flow in your verse,That 1st bar was stretched out too much,making it flow bad.And it also wasn't a punch.Saying you'll smash 'em,trash 'em,and take his mic away doesn't diss.And your last bar,wit the sleep/vet clinic thingy....PLAYED OUT.

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