Word. My first poetry piece....EVER.

So if you hate it, please say so, lol. I don't care if it's not super dope because it is my first try at poetry.


Suicidal Escape
{a.k.a. "Heavenly Suicide"}

Motionless, a fallen statue of morose thoughts
A resting soul of despair, journeys to a corpse
Painful memories, visions of attacking hatred
Desperate attempts at acceptance slowly waning
Pushed into solitude, the mind embraces loneliness
Forever to dwell in its chamber of isolation
Eyes reflecting, faint glimmers of light moments
Open mouthed, low breathing sounds through silence
A picture of no emotion, the face stares at blank walls
Deafening sounds of approaching doom,
They echo within ears, listening to water falls.
The embodiment of death, its cold touch flows,
Caressing the chosen body, a vessel so froze
Unlocked, from metallic captivity the blanket grows
It sweeps along flesh, rising to penetrate open holes
Flooding the tunnels of life, it cascades down an open throat
The dying statue falls back, the wet touch enters the nose
Eyes close, a veil of black cast by weakened covers
Water overflows, the body submerges beneath layers
Through black curtains, the eyes capture a glow
Within its watered coffin, the body glides towards light
Death’s cold touch is gone, the body welcomes warmth
Engulfed by light, the minds pain is no more.


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