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Old 11-14-05, 01:59 PM   #7
T-Dot
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Voted For: one mic

One Mic:
its obvious to see, im killin you, watch me bomb this
you and and your wackness will always produce conflict
iight punch - 4/10
like house of pain i get the crowd jumpin
the only thing you bringin in rap is shame to brooklyn
Not Good - 2/10
im spittin raw, cant get a real girl, so you lickin whores
conflicts like a bad restaurant, cuz there aint no point in givin more*
Meh - 3/10
like destiny's child, man, your outta breath
its obvious to see your avatar symbolises lyrical death
Played - 2/10
11/50

You had a good opener, and the flow was decent.


~Conflict~:
How u got me battlin a kid from UK/
Ima smash’em,trashem take his last mic away/
ok punches - 3/10
Dis kid don’t know wat he doin that he fukin wit Brooklyn/
“Go Home Bitch ” cause that’s the only trip ull be bookin/
iight - 5/10
he thinks he could beat something that fukin I created/
they count his mic as “deadly” so bad to be confiscated/
ok - 4/10
Ima leave this kid finished with his corpse diminished/
This dog is sick ima put him to sleep like vetinarian clinics/
ok punch - 5/10
17/50

You had a good flow, and some punches that hit hard.

Vote - Conflict

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