View Single Post
Old 11-21-05, 09:41 PM   #10
Past Tense
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
 
Past Tense's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,460
From: THE NORTHWEST
IP:

aight i'm peepin now

Production:Aight the beat is fire..but too many sampled beats going around:7.5/10

Flow:ya flow is kinda choppy but you rode the beat good...its aight:6/10

Pressesne:this is somthing u need too work on you sound like u afriad of the mic man really show how you feel your rappin about pain..man show the pain in ur rap:6/10

Emotion:Again somthin u need too work on this is what gets ur flow down...once you get better at this u'll be a solid audio head....right nwo this is ur major weakenss but work on that and u'll get better like what you right say it like u mean it...:6/10

Overall:Overall this song is just ehhh aight....nothin too hot.....keep it coming tho your coming up like crazy keep it up:6/10

Stay up and stay reall
~1
__________________

ADD ME LETS MAKE SOMETHING
  Reply With Quote