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11-21-05, 03:31 PM
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Intermental - Pain (true shit)
IP: 6A8A FF24
www.soundclick.com/intermental
"PAIN"... this some real true shit man..holla at me...please feed and lsiten to all three verses itll mean alot to me... http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215092 http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215164 WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL "PAIN" HOLLA ATCHA BOI
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11-21-05, 03:34 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 70F7 A7B6
Checkin
Beats Dope Lyrics Are Deep Emotions Good Delivery's Dope Presence Nice 2nd Verse lyrics Are Real Deep Same As Above BUt Deeper Lyrics Im Surprised At The Deepness Of This Track 3rd Verse Is up LYrics Are Real Deep Your Best Verse But I Dont Feel The Kinda Topic On This You Should Keep Your Head Up And Dont Think Like You Are But Tracks Nice 9/10 Keep Up
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11-21-05, 03:37 PM
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IP: 6A8A FF24
^^word i feel u man thanks...
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11-21-05, 04:09 PM
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IP: 8F31 A351
uppin...........
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11-21-05, 04:34 PM
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IP: 8F31 A351
uppin..............
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11-21-05, 05:11 PM
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Champion
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IP: 8F31 A351
upppin...........
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11-21-05, 05:34 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 360B 564F
dope your quality is wayy better , nice emotions man, chorus is dope i like the sampling, nice flow, really deep , thats what i like homie, the beat is cool too, this is one of your best track man, now lets collab on that beat i made that you like
 werdness nice track man, i prefer solo tracks by you or tracks like intermental feat speats you know lol haha dope peace |
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11-21-05, 05:36 PM
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IP: 8F31 A351
^lol word..thanks for the feed man.........
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11-21-05, 07:55 PM
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vanquising Mc's Daily
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IP: 42C9 6651
Listening... Beats tight. your lyrics kinda sound muffled, but not that bad.. You overall lyrical ability is tight, just have a hard time hearing some of it.. Anyway.. your flow is good sounds on point, presence is nice and delivery as well.. good job, just work on that quality a bit..
drop some feed on my joint in my sig.. word
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11-21-05, 09:41 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
aight i'm peepin now
Production:Aight the beat is fire..but too many sampled beats going around:7.5/10 Flow:ya flow is kinda choppy but you rode the beat good...its aight:6/10 Pressesne:this is somthing u need too work on you sound like u afriad of the mic man really show how you feel your rappin about pain..man show the pain in ur rap:6/10 Emotion:Again somthin u need too work on this is what gets ur flow down...once you get better at this u'll be a solid audio head....right nwo this is ur major weakenss but work on that and u'll get better like what you right say it like u mean it...:6/10 Overall:Overall this song is just ehhh aight....nothin too hot.....keep it coming tho your coming up like crazy keep it up:6/10 Stay up and stay reall ~1 |
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11-22-05, 02:35 PM
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IP: 09B7 A296
Thanks for tha feed yall.........
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11-22-05, 03:37 PM
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IP: 5824 294A
upppin this cmon yall.......
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11-22-05, 04:30 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 303B 3599
beats pretty hot. Who produced it?
Your emotion in both verses which is more cadence than anything in your particular case, should have come up some, but it gets cockblocked to a large extent by that steaming turd of a mic you spit into. The lyrics are obviously from the heart, just by listening to em. the flow's off in some spots as well. I think you should keep on rhyming, then come back to this track in like 2-3 months when your style solidifies a bit more and re-record it. Because you owe it to your self.
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11-22-05, 06:05 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
vocals needed to be amped
beat is good...kinda jay-ish flow is not bad...delivery kinda lacks in this one though...and u normally come nice with delivery is this what you talked to me about? lyrics were personal I liked the track...just needs polish 1
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11-22-05, 06:39 PM
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New to RV
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IP: DCF5 BA5F
you seem to be mumbling alittle bit ...but this is a dope ass beat...im feeling it alot man.....your lyrics arent bad at all andi can feel your emotion through your voice a bit...but i can hardly understand you man in some parts....try to rap more clearly....i dont know maybe its just me but this is a dope drop man...nice job
check my old track and leave feedback After the Storm |
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