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Old 11-22-05, 12:58 PM   #11
E.C
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okkkkkk....

beat ias pretty sick... infact i want this beat send it me

unf

you have elevated... lyrics are kool... flow is on point emotion needs a bit of work, delivery is iite... your breath control has improved alot, you cvould do wiv switchin ya flow up to make it more interesting

hook is pretty kool like it

second verse... same as the first everythings kooll... actually i couldnt tell idf the hook was the verse or not. so next time make it clear n shit add a lil effect on it to seperate the two...

LE

ok your quality is pretty meh alot of hisssssss lol... flow is on point emotion is kool delivery is ok... lyrics are nice... kool verse man like it

hook again like it

overall kool track nice collabo both need to work on a few things LE yas quality n emotion n unf u need ya delivery flow switch ups and delivery

kool track
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