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Old 11-22-05, 04:30 PM   #13
∆ P E X X
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beats pretty hot. Who produced it?

Your emotion in both verses which is more cadence than anything in your particular case, should have come up some, but it gets cockblocked to a large extent by that steaming turd of a mic you spit into. The lyrics are obviously from the heart, just by listening to em. the flow's off in some spots as well. I think you should keep on rhyming, then come back to this track in like 2-3 months when your style solidifies a bit more and re-record it. Because you owe it to your self.
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