nice again there dusty.

Couple of pointers as i think you are ready for them.

Next peice you write try to experiment with a wider vocab. Think of words and phrases you aint used in rapping yet and try them.

Also try some multi rhyming. same sounds in one line
eg: bitch can lick my dick quick til it spits

^^thts basic but you get the idea.

I see alot of potential wiv you but you need to elevate the intelligence of the verses a bit more. As good as that would sound wen you spit it you need to remember people are reading it and perhaps use something that you know is really funny or something.

Have a think about that bro

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