your first couple bars flowed very well....i was feelin them
more then the rest, decent concept, the hook was pretty good
vocab was decent, the ache to the bones line fell off on flow
but other then that it was`well worded...
improve on: connectin with the reader, maybe try to use more metas
even wordplay is good in open mics imo..
overall this was a good piece..

7/10

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!