speats:your verse was ok, opener was decent,
was feelin the forced rhymin thou, that kinda hurt it
in places, some lines in your verse were kinda choppy
but still conveyed your concept..
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gkillaz:your verse was good, better one of the two
your flow was helped a lil by the repetative same soundin
syllable words you used, you kept it consistent..
your closer was the best part of both verses..
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n i say same soundin syllable words cuz multi's
are achieved by 2 or more words consecutivly,
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decent piece guys...rtf on my om...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!