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11-26-05, 05:05 PM
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Hell yeah
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Speats Featuring GKillaz- Something True
IP: 3D49 422E
SPEATS: Its been a while that i had to say this................ I tryed suicide, life aint something to play with/ I noticed that when i lost some people i once knew Its been so sad, that i didnt know what to do........./ I wanted to kill my soul and reach them in heaven Noone knows me really, its been a long time coming/ i know this kid who crys about his dad raping him Just because the dude couldnt hang out with other womens/ Im just here to spread the truth, its nothing to joke with I still see people talking and laughting about it/ GKILLAZ: The world is always revolvin'... life just keeps on evolvin'.... Starvation across the earth problems we try to be solvin'... Men abusin' women cars killin' the globe wit pollution... All these problems and the goverment has no solution... Revolutions in danger its up to the people to make a change... Respect strangers give homeless people your spare change... Deranged fools blowin' up skewls, where our kids learn... How they goin' to grow up to be somethin' if there eduction burns... Still no one shows any conern there to busy in there own world... Wont stop to care until somethin' happens to there boy or girl... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2553608 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2553614 Last edited by .::.Speats.::. : 11-26-05 at 05:21 PM. |
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11-26-05, 05:21 PM
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#2
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Hell yeah
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IP: 3D49 422E
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11-27-05, 12:39 AM
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#3
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5218 F156
I liked you beginin' but the last parts got a bit off flow, like the rhymes were forced into it. The other guys verse was nice, good vocab adn ncie flow expect for when he rhymed change with the same word again.
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11-27-05, 12:51 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 64C6 1072
I liked it! The vocab was good, a lil off on the multis other than that I would give it a 7.5/10!
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11-27-05, 01:19 AM
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#5
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 2C2E 2A8E
yo Ill Technique I didnt rhyme the same word twice, because lookin' for a change, and spare change have two differnt meanings.
Thx for the feedback y'all.
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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...  ....Because Homie i'm The Shit!
TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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11-27-05, 04:26 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5218 F156
may not have the same meaning but exact spellin in the word
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11-27-05, 04:43 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: 2C2E 2A8E
that doesnt matter, as long as it has a differnt meanin' it still isnt that great but it would have been worse if I used the same meanin'.
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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two... ....Because Homie i'm The Shit!
TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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11-27-05, 07:44 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 34E4 9FE7
speats:your verse was ok, opener was decent,
was feelin the forced rhymin thou, that kinda hurt it in places, some lines in your verse were kinda choppy but still conveyed your concept.. . gkillaz:your verse was good, better one of the two your flow was helped a lil by the repetative same soundin syllable words you used, you kept it consistent.. your closer was the best part of both verses.. . n i say same soundin syllable words cuz multi's are achieved by 2 or more words consecutivly, . decent piece guys...rtf on my om...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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11-28-05, 12:16 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: E7A1 D96E
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11-28-05, 01:11 AM
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#11
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
good emotion, nice beggining in your verse speats. Slowly got a bit weaker thru out, buit all in you had a solid verse.
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11-28-05, 10:37 AM
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#12
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Light Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Look SPEATS you shook on streets so you write lame
Can’t make the hood tame why protect your good name? Rhyme not thrilling and deft why talk of killing yourself? Look your true pride fried just to talk of suicide no wealth In this, should be teeming with life not steaming with strife Become a quitter quick when there’s bitter conflict a knife Maybe useful and advice can be crucial so keep it on the down low Your stats collide and about the cats that died how do you know They landed in Heaven? A place of delight and peace but yo In hell they have to fight the beast so chill homey have a cup of coco And you call me whack the tall fact is your rhyme didn’t make sense homey |
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11-28-05, 04:46 PM
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#13
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Hell yeah
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IP: B1CD 8059
somebody kill him ^^^^
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11-30-05, 02:40 PM
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#14
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Killin' G'z
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IP: D4FA A3B8
Gladbag gets your trash into the dumpster, and not my thread. or Speats.
Fuckin' NOOB!
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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two... ....Because Homie i'm The Shit!
TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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