Firstly I can tell you put some effort into this... the descriptive aspect of this piece was 10/10. Now, I'm not really one for judging poetry as everyones styles always different. I thought this piece was well writen... well thought out and I could really feel the emotion dripping off each line. Some interesting choices of words were scattered throughout... though not so much as to clog the readers mind with confusion.

Overall I think this was pretty dope my man.

Peace.

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