Pretty good. Nice use of vocabulary. Loving the concept and your approach, the use of your metaphors was hard hitting. Imagery was vividly decent, emotion was some-what like velvet quiet and soft. This is a good poem, nicly done.
__________________
mystery Is a Freak!!
ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
![Smilie](/images/smilies/smile.gif)
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*