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Old 11-29-05, 11:45 AM   #9
Mentalz
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Sorry Multie, bit of feed now:

Firstly, yah, Mr. Multie has some talent, he made my list of people to look out for with the first OM he dropped.

This piece had some nice, fluid flowing vocab, not overly used. The emotion was decent... What I feel your strong point in this piece was? Your imagery. Very vivid man.

Now the drawback. One thing I dont like is the brevity of your drops bro. Some of the shit you drop im like "man, wtf its over". The concept was one thing I didnt care for. Not my cup of beer.

Anyways, keep it up bro.

Peace.
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