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Old 12-03-05, 01:22 AM   #15
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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man i knew i shoulda used this beat like 3 months ago..... back wen people didnt even knew this song existed...... now if i do it, ima look like everyone else

anyways...... u got some pretty good flow, altho nuthin amazin, but u never fall off, but im not feelin sum of these punches, kinda commercial punches...... some of its good lyrical tho, but alil commercial, altho its hard to not make a commercial battle track, lol...... aight quality compared to most people

put some emotion in this man..... ur flow and presence is aight, but u needa have some emotion in this..... sounds like ur a couple steps away from whisperin

decent track
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