hmmmm....... that was very original, i like the creativity...... good use of metaphors, but maybe a little too good..... w/out the explanation, i would've been lost...... nice piece, i enjoyed it a lot........ -Tweety's #1 fan

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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