lmfao @ the singing. never do that again unless your not gonna pause all the time, you you sing you gotta be like Untriumphant.......! you got keep sayin it as it was a bigger word or w/e but anyway this is better you got better, quality needs work I still hear them pops. but takin that sock off worked I guess. the verse was short and you still pause to much, keep rappin man, pace yourself and keep spittin dont pause and shit. write them bars longer or somin.

anyway not bad man 1.

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