Insane in the textbrain
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ugh, both weak
bit of advice, don't capitalise every word, it's a waste of time and makes you look like a newb. Don't replace s with z unless you need to for wordplay.
Also if a line has more than around 12-13 words it's bound to be stretched unless there's inner rhyming.
I also think Aimez edged it slightly
v/Aimez
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
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