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12-04-05, 08:33 PM
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25. One Mic vs. 26. Aimez
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12-04-05, 08:39 PM
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Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 0825 899A
Yea Thats wasuup Im Still In This Thang ........
Checkin IN
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12-05-05, 11:01 AM
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One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
check check........................................
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12-05-05, 11:20 AM
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IP: BB77 E4BA
4-3 record??? most wins from no-shows? its strange when you say that you're blessed
you got no place on RV................... ...................................if you cant even get your punctuation correct! want explanations, pm me.....
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12-05-05, 11:21 AM
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IP: BB77 E4BA
dropped early...................
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12-05-05, 06:46 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
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You Speaking Back On Yo Word So Niggas Know You Talk Curly My Punchez Are Predestined To Kill Thats Why You dropped early All Punch No personal Cant 4get Punchline League not personals League Uppin for votes ......
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12-05-05, 07:34 PM
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IP: AC2A 692A
4-3 record??? most wins from no-shows? its strange when you say that you're blessed
you got no place on RV................... ...................................if you cant even get your punctuation correct! Stretched and ugly structure...personal i suppose but not heavy. VS You Speaking Back On Yo Word So Niggas Know You Talk Curly My Punchez Are Predestined To Kill Thats Why You dropped early Basic but imo it hit a bit harder, weak battle really, aimez edged it. V./ Aimez. rtf in pll
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12-05-05, 07:39 PM
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Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanx ill supply my links soon ......................
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12-05-05, 07:50 PM
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IP: 48F4 AA07
ugh, both weak
bit of advice, don't capitalise every word, it's a waste of time and makes you look like a newb. Don't replace s with z unless you need to for wordplay. Also if a line has more than around 12-13 words it's bound to be stretched unless there's inner rhyming. I also think Aimez edged it slightly v/Aimez
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12-05-05, 08:10 PM
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IP: 1CD5 0806
1 Mic would have won had he re worded his punch.
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12-05-05, 10:09 PM
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both were ehh.........but aimez came better.....more wittier of a punch..
v/aimez |
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12-06-05, 12:22 AM
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IP: 9DB1 64D6
ermmm,
one mic's punch seems stretched visually, but for me when i read it out it had flow to it, the structure is basically another variation of the 3-line bar style. the personal was there, not the best but still ok. aimez.....tried to play off the quote, that is played and the basic simplicity to the punch let it down to, also the fact that he bolded the last part adds an element of forcing the wordplay when it wasn't necessary. so, i am going to disagree with everyone else... V/ - one mic
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12-06-05, 02:09 PM
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One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
thanx for votin y'all. uppin this....................
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12-06-05, 04:10 PM
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The Original Half Ass King
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V/One Mic...
Weak Battle but... ...I just think playing off quotes is gay unless you do a good job of it. RTF on my PL Battle homie. |
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12-06-05, 04:25 PM
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One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
thanx for the vote man. 3-2. uppin this shit.........
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