ermmm,

one mic's punch seems stretched visually, but for me when i read it out it had flow to it, the structure is basically another variation of the 3-line bar style. the personal was there, not the best but still ok.

aimez.....tried to play off the quote, that is played and the basic simplicity to the punch let it down to, also the fact that he bolded the last part adds an element of forcing the wordplay when it wasn't necessary.

so, i am going to disagree with everyone else...

V/ - one mic

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