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Old 12-11-05, 05:54 PM   #7
Ryan Hughes
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From: Jerzy
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Voted For: the_DukE

This nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/
rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks//
^^^Weak opener..played
make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/
sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels//
^^^Weak
droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/
got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit//
^^^Ight
this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/
the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen//
^^^No
i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/
walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain//
^^^Weak
on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/
wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek//
^^^played first line

Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows...
Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose..
^^^Ight opener
Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around...
Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns...
^^^Weak
I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child...
When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile...
^^^Nice punch
Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs...
Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes...
^^^Ight nuthin special
In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice...
I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ...
^^^Good
U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada...
Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava...
^^^Ight
Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits...
I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits...
^^^Good closer

V/Wicked one this was a one sided one......the duke i see u werkin on things ur elavatin jus battle ppl more ur level now....wicked one u came wit a solid verse it was consistent wit diss's that werent played...
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