Nice drop man, again. This piece has a well drawn out concept with good imagery. I liked your style of multies, was different. Though, it seemed you were trying to help people get the flow of them, if not just get them to run along together. Havent seen that done in awhile, lol. I actually enjoyed the last verse with the lack of that-dash-shit.
Nice solid topical, good emotion man. Keep them coming!
Peace.