Beat choice is really good, some west coast flavor into it.

Good way to introduce the song. But you need a whole lot more emotion. In your verses, you was very monotone, which only works on more dreary beats. Your vocab is pretty decent, but your delievery is simple. You can only pull off simple flows when you add more emotion into your words. Try when you rap that your not just making a song, but your making a point to those who are listening the song. Overall, decent track, but up your emotion big time.

7/10

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