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Old 12-15-05, 10:00 PM   #10
Nick Knack
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Voted For: ~Conflict~

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not a lot of punchez, just saying your better. the little punchez you had were kinda weak. not a ton of creativity either. u need to work on insulting and not saying u r better.

conflict

u had a few punches in thiz verse that hit kinda hard. i last how you said his mic was confiscated. though u said that twice, so u need to work on making more punches from different conceptz. decent verse though.

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