Voted For: Wicked One

Wicked One

Look, your trap should shut close, i bust flows...
Penetrate the thin film, u virgin, i even got u bleeding through your fuckin nose..
^lmao at last line, first was bleh but second was pretty funny hehe

Don't even attempt threats, your even worse this time around...
Im turnin spars to beatdowns, don't even break sweats when I beat clowns...
^not really feelin it but its decent bar though

I'm wild but ya'll endorse my style and I'mma do ya'll all a favor and abort this child...
When I put the heat to his face it'll make his mouth brighter than Paul Wall's Smile...
^haha, good comparison right here, nice punch as well

Two-hundred and fifty with muscle, jack, as it still climbs...
Shit, without all the extra weight u couldn't carry anyone of my rhymes...
^hehe, solid shit, nothing WHOA but solid enough ya kno

In this battle u still wont make a comeback, u aint nearly that nice...
I mean come on now, were still waiting on jesus christ...
^lolz, decent but not as good as previous one

U can't fuck with me, realize you cant do me nada...
Spar with me? bitch please, your only trying to out run lava...
^solid, not like the other solid one, this was bit less but still aight

Fuck the drama, your persona's taken enough hits...
I just left this cat covered in one of my day after thanksgiving shits...
^haha...this just killed it...nice stuff this closer

Overall solid battle, had few fillers in there though but got funny shit in it as well.



the_DukE

this nigga ate cement for breakfast, got him shittin bricks/
rhymes suckin like some parasites verbalizin ticks//
^aight decent opener, aight wordplay

make u feel like youz in oz wit my lyrical skills/
sayin "theres no place like home" while ya clickin ya heels//
^hmmm not really feelin this line right here

droppin sticky-icky bombs one hit will make u quit/
got u diagnosed wit cottonmouth, unable to spit//
^good last line, first is bleh though but solid

this is it, flap jack flow, bisquick verbals i be flippin/
the outcome got you EARy, now ya too afraid to listen//
^again last line is better than first one, work on ya build-ups

i need some toilet paper, cuz im almost done shittin/
walkin off with a victory, makin me greater than britain//
[b]^uhmmmm...no...this wasn't working at all...

on your knees, kiss my toes and get ready for de-FEET/
wit my words i took your paddle, now you up shits creek//
^uhm I seen the feet-line lots of times already

Get more creativity in ya lines, concepts were good here n there, work on em build-ups too but ya got potential for sure

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