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Old 12-21-05, 11:07 PM   #24
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Voted For: Wicked One

Heres how I see it...

Wicked-- You had a basically better verse...attempted multies on some lines...seems like yo verse was a lil bit more complxed than Duke's...structure could've been better...flow was on at some points...good verse tho..

Duke-- Yo verse was too simple...it flowed nicely, you had better structure, but yo punches werent complexed enough...you beat em in everything but multies and punches...just work on complexing those 2, and you straight...

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