wut if u don't have a girl?

eeh

beat...I'm not feelin...sounds like the theme music to cheers or something...wait, I actually rapped to the theme from cheers

nvm


Inter...ur flow is fine...ur delivery is expressionless...and for this to be ur girl, u don't sound convinced

hook sounds nice...cud be amped...I couldn't decipher what he was singing


ur vocals need to come through crisper...amp them...and ur emotion is ZELCH

disappointing


the feel of this track is good, but that's only because the beat is so expressive...Take away the beat, and you have a lackluster track

However, it's personal, so I won't hold that against you.


Not a bad drop homie...jus need WAY MORE EMOTION in a track dedicated to the one u supposedly love.


1

__________________

Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"