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Old 12-24-05, 01:42 AM   #19
Ca'lam
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aight..



first verse - flow was shaky in my opinion.. and couldnt understand alot of whaty your were saying.. had to listen hard to get it.. lyrics were aight.. not a bad verse..

chorus - He can sing.. harmonies were on point most of the time..

Second Verse - same as the first.. flow could have been more captivating.. but wasent bad..

third verse - same as before


i think you need work on ya lyrics a lil more.. flow will come.. not a bad track but it could use some work.. 6'ish/10
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