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Old 12-26-05, 05:56 AM   #23
GeDa Beast
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see, I told you I was goin leave some feedback
Im lovin the piano
1st verse was cool
Im not really into love songs, girly tracks that much
the hook is fine
2nd verse
sounds ALOT better than the 1st verse
you was flowin waay better
hook again
3rd verse
im mos def feelin the rhyme scheme better
the hot dog and chedda line was, lol, un explainable, man
ok ok ok, overall, I would have to say this track is average.
Im not a big fan of love songs/ girly tracks, I only really feel a few.
But this shit isnt bad, because you was on the level of Bow Wow and Pretty Ricky and them other cats that be makin songs like this
its all good, keep elevatin, keep droppin tracks, as always
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