Ok, firstly nice beat.
Diverged: flow was nice, lyrics were good, I actually got into it a bit
(and I usually dont on RV audio's)
Hook: Was ok, the flow fell off in my eyes on the second bar. theme was ok though.
Para. Your lyrics wernt to bad man, and I havent really listened to anything else of yours but it sounds to me like you have the same problem I use too. I think you're trying to force your flow b/c you speed up and pause to wait or catch up to the beat in a few places.
Overall, production was done well. Mainly I'd just work out the few kinks yall have and you'd be good.
Peace.
Feed returned.