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Old 01-01-06, 10:47 AM   #8
Mentalz
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Voted For: Daubs

Felt pretty one sided to me. Daubs had better punches, even though he keyed it... it still flowed better in my opinion.

he got locked up..he's stuck, fuck thinkin he's bad
how can we freestylez...when even his prewrittens are wack
^meh..
I let you in LL, it caused a bang like an explosion
fam saw wackness in you
but I only let you in when id decided to CLOSE them
^so so.
i can imagine your house in LA..i know where you live sty
and your house isnt fat and pink, but its still pig,sty
^ UK Humor?
he comes with played shit like, "im sicker than infections"
so when he tryed out for 3 CREWS..
..he suffered TRIPLE rejection
^Had me laughin'.
il showdown how to rap n' make him think his stylez not wack
then pin him to the floor......and win with atack
^...don't throw your arm out...
that^ lacked flow creativity and personals,i got the curse
but shit, that ONE punch describes your WHOLE verse
^decent
ima use a keystlye to win, its all that i need
but if you keystylez...then my victorys guaranteed
^meh..

Sho, you verse didnt seem like it had any type of direction or flow in my eyes.

So let me just attack this dude and snatch his jewels then whack this hersey./
His raps bad like they wack and blurry....
....but ill leave you more blak-and-blue then a Magics Jersey/
^Pretty good, but I don't do text so mebe thats a played punch.
Im Game and u be remindin me of Yayo, im jus new and u still be gettin KO'd/
dont say no, stay low, u forced mo den how many 50 cents go into payphones/
^meh...
im wordin Acid- and FLames, im attackin wit pain, mai lines wud fracture ya brain, /
People claim u game, u Stealin da G and A, but still aint half of muh GAME/
^wack
yo rhymes petty, you aint ready, your rhymes decrease while mines augment,/
u lyin, cuz the only time you got a nine in your pants is when you got penis enlargment/
^so so
I destroy any nemesis masculine or-femenine-fags,/
I sever them... your a detriment you sucked off eleven men.. including my ass/
^played idea
rhis guy below-me..named daubs. experenced-an-orgy/
did the train, and thas how they came up.....
.....with the theme for rice-a-roni/
^W.T.F.?
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