nice beat....kinda club type...

yea this delivery is 30 times better man...flow is good....

hook is pretty good actually...kinda catchy....BUT u gotta learn to mix it better so it sounds more like a hook...

only problem with your part is the mixing...just learn how to mix better...and youll be putting out some nice stuff....

2nd dude....is pretty nice.....hes just needs to touch up the flow a lil bit...

thats really the only problem there.....its not a bad flow...it could just be upped a lil

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