wow...ur in PSA? Didn't even know that. Go figure.


Beat: I liked it...real up tempo and cheery


Flow: inter...flow was good...watch out for that slurring of words...If all else fails, write your lyrics so that you won't have to say words you know you struggle with until you can correct that. It isn't terrible. However, it can detract from your verse.

UNF...you stress the "wrong" words sometimes IMO. Your flow is good. But, at times it lacks fluidity because it sounds like you're exhaling on the wrong words. It's not bad though. I'm just in a real keen mood and mode right now.

Rhyming: Inter, good...elevating...UNF...standard...acceptable


Delivery: Both came appropriate for this track, esp. considering the topic.



Lyrics: Nothing major one way or the other...adequate



Summary: Not a bad track...I actually listened the whole way through.


Keep droppin and elevating

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