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Old 01-03-06, 10:55 AM   #1
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Yeahhhhhhhhh!!!

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This Is The First Track Off Me And Inters Mixtape

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Old 01-03-06, 10:57 AM   #2
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Old 01-03-06, 11:09 AM   #3
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nice beat.........nice flow likin yer verse unf delivery is on point dogg
good lyrics .......still listnin.......inter nice flow to delievery is off in a few spot but on for tha most part nice job on this man great quality overall track gets 8.5/10
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Old 01-03-06, 11:09 AM   #4
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nice, ur actually doin a mixtape together
u and inter have to be the best collabo pair i've heard on rv, i was hopin u'd do somethin like this
unf ur new delivery is great, u killed the hook again, all the verses were ight
8.5-9/10 hot but not as good as ridah boi
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Old 01-03-06, 11:12 AM   #5
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Yeah thats whatsup thanks yall....
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Old 01-03-06, 11:12 AM   #6
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Old 01-03-06, 11:14 AM   #7
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who ever does the chorus second needs to up their quality or mixin skills........ yo, i look this delivery ALOT better than the old one..... damn this is alot nicer.... id say to keep it like this.... lyrics are ok... quality is pretty decent... im feelin the second verse alil better than the first...

this is better than the first collab.... u both came about even in it... good job
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thanks............
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Old 01-03-06, 11:25 AM   #9
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beats coo
delivery needs work
flows ok
emotions iight
i dont like the production on the track..
i cant really hear what ure even saying..

so its ok i guess, just fix up ure production and work on presence/delivery

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^^Did You Even Listen To It....Theres Two People


yea i listen but both u were pretty much the same so i just left my feed way it was

go feed on mine now
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Old 01-03-06, 12:40 PM   #12
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yea i listen but both u were pretty much the same so i just left my feed way it was


Oh Aight koo........
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wow...ur in PSA? Didn't even know that. Go figure.


Beat: I liked it...real up tempo and cheery


Flow: inter...flow was good...watch out for that slurring of words...If all else fails, write your lyrics so that you won't have to say words you know you struggle with until you can correct that. It isn't terrible. However, it can detract from your verse.

UNF...you stress the "wrong" words sometimes IMO. Your flow is good. But, at times it lacks fluidity because it sounds like you're exhaling on the wrong words. It's not bad though. I'm just in a real keen mood and mode right now.

Rhyming: Inter, good...elevating...UNF...standard...acceptable


Delivery: Both came appropriate for this track, esp. considering the topic.



Lyrics: Nothing major one way or the other...adequate



Summary: Not a bad track...I actually listened the whole way through.


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