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Old 01-04-06, 01:38 PM   #6
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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*listenin* this is the first track ive heard from u

pretty good quality..... intro is aight.... im likin the beat...

first verse was pretty good... good presence.... quality is nice.... u had a decent flow and lyrics were nice

Hook is crazy... really feelin it... nice

Second verse is good also, but i think the first person fit better on the track.... both had decent lyrics..... damn, not likin the second hook... first person should do that part.... sorry but u cant sing that well, needa work on that

besides the very end this track is one of the better ones ive heard on RV.... this is good enough for mixtape/LP if u fix the endin alil
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