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Old 01-04-06, 01:52 PM   #12
TeamOne
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*listenin*

good intro..... ur singin is pretty good, real nice feel to it but it might be alil loud, cuz i had alil trouble hearin the hook in the beginnin.....

first verse is decent... good flow, ur really bringin some heat now

still havin trouble hearin the whole track cuz of that "all praise" ur singin may be alil too loud

Second verse.... i think that ur flow was alil offa t some points but still enjoyable

exit was decent..... this track is kinda short but thats aight..... just turn down the singin alil and thisll be pretty nice...
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