alright, this is a piece i wrote for my girl, thought i might as well get some feed on it, try not to be dicks, aight? oh, and i wrote this in an hour, yesterday, so boo hoo if structure or anything sucks
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the world's always changing, but i still stand true
because nothing could happen, that'd change my love for you
time indicates your beauty, and with it, it only grows
but yet as time passes, you'll still seem a blossoming rose
for in the garden of my soul, where only darkness is known
you shine so brightly, it cracks right through the stone
a lone flower emerges, its deep crimson petals
offsets any doubts of life, keeping fate on the level
yeah, that was deep, but do you know how that happens?
i mass my love for you with passion, and flash it to action
into a fashionable attraction, surpassin' any faction
creatin enough traction, so love passes everlastin'
mathematical satisfactoin, i'm matchin your reactions
theres so many parts of you to like, i'll enjoy solving fractions
but rationally its different, if you really think it through
should you be alive, seeing how you're too good to be true?
it doesn't seem right, but hold on, i'll tell you what does
when we hold each other tight, and our lips come to touch
re-arrage the alphabet? sure, i'd put 'i' and 'u' together
but i'd also stick in 4 others, just to make it a little better
and then it'd be perfect, that combination sounds the best
but still my favourite beats are putting an ear to your chest
nessle my head beneath your chin, i could lie there for weeks
the only time i'd move, i'd land a kiss on your cheek
i have sentances to tell you, that i can't put into words...i
just want to be around you, heh, i'm jealous of your shirt
a lifetime seems forever, doesn't seem like i'll last, however
it'd be alot better for me, if we could spend it together
you and me for eternity, even beyond the face of earth
'you and me'..(pause)...those three words probly the best in the verse
it hurts to be away, but i'll tell you what gets me through
each day that passes, marks one day closer to see you
i'm glad we're apart.......trust me, we're not at a loss
cause i'd hate to imagine my life if our paths never crossed
we all seek inner peace, you ask me? i've found mine
cause i've never felt so free when i stare in those brown eyes
with that bright smile of yours, every night becomes noon
and so warm hearted, even december feels like june
and when everything's outta sync, and can't stand the noise
it all seems so fitting, when it blends with your voice
its more than music to my ears, its a symphony and choir
your pitch is like angels, lifting spirits from the fire
you ask about our future? well i'd tell you if i knew
how bout i meet you at the fork in the road, a basket full of food?
we can decide together, your arms around my shoulders
my hands down on your hips...cliff hanging with boulders
see, as long as im with you, theres no where else to be
i know this is in my chest, how? cause you're what turns the key
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