I liked this piece, and who gives a fuck about structure. The fact that this was done in an hour was good, you stayed consistent throughout with a high level of emotion packed into the piece. You levelled the whole thing with a nice mixture of emotion, imagery of feeling, and complexity with your delivery. It wasn't some basic "I love you" piece of crap.....it actually had some feeling to it which is good, because the generic pieces of shit on this idea are annoying. Overall, a real good quick piece.

OVERALL: 7/10

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