I liked the intro


beat is good


Here's a tip...Don't DUB your entire verse



When you come in after a short pause, you sound sorta like LE (voice wise)


I like ur delivery in spots...some unique rhyming in spots...

I wasn't following ur lyrics here...not to say they were bad...but they went by me in spots


THis is an interesting sounding track


not bad homie


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