The Topical Juggernaut
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IP:
i wouldn't doubt it if that act is treason
im still waiting for the day they put a tax on breathin
Realist lines you've ever dropped.
Concept wasnt too bad, which creates reason for the emotion... as to why you wrote it. Some people talk, some people do. I hate fake people. Flow was fairly good, vocab small. However the overall message outweighs your flaws in my opinion. Not your best drop ever... but a damn good relayinto your train of thought bro.
Keep it up.
Peace.
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