okay, i know i know, your lines were long, but thats okay, i got past it....there was alot packed into this, but it was totally worth the read, it had cool flow and multies, which is nice to read once in a while....good story, monkey see monkey do, or whatever....i can relate, well, just because i see so many people ruin their lives getting into this shit in my town, its disgusting....this kinda made me sad, but at the same time, annoying because i've seen it before, but good write, you punched more than one emotion outta me with this, good job, i'll try to find some lines i liked:

Verily she's alone, he's slipped away again to the numb parade of psycosis ...
Paranoya is ghost mist and rides to battle alongside the white captors blown kiss
Returning wordless, ever worthless as he closes the field inwhich he reigns ...
He rounds the corner of heavens bend and enters hell in a moments pausing pang

word up son, word up

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