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Old 01-14-06, 12:52 AM   #6
Mentalz
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Dope as fuck.

Excellant concept, story telling, imagery and emotion. Vocab was nice too. I do think if you included a bit more internal rhymes it would have been even better though. This is one oif the better pieces i've read on the OM forum in along while, the best in a good 2-3 months easily.

Long, yes, worth the read? Fuck yah. The message you sent was vivd, very well explained and easily understood. Good for most the heads on RV... they don't decipher shit.

Exceptional drop man, though I know you're not a regular here, I would encourage you to be. Would make a nice addition to the scene.

Peace.
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