some good punches...some are played


flow is def. slower tempo than you're used to

It isn't bad, but lacks panache...it's lackluster

u need a rhythm to ur flow...


after a while, I lost interest in ur lyrics because of the monotonous delivery


some tru lyrics dashed in here and there


this needs work

With a hotter flow, you could have pulled off this valiant effort at lyricism



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