http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3347874

slowed it down a bit for ya'll =]


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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2617461
tony self
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219486
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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

You posted a link to something else....not your SC....

....even though you have a link in your sig ™

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I can tell that you're used to rapping faster than this......it shows in your flow. It sounds like you wanna take off with the flow, but you gotta slow yourself sown in spots. You don't really have a presence at all. It really sounds like you're just reading.....try to memorize a little of what you write so you can just read it to remind yourself of the next line....

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some good punches...some are played


flow is def. slower tempo than you're used to

It isn't bad, but lacks panache...it's lackluster

u need a rhythm to ur flow...


after a while, I lost interest in ur lyrics because of the monotonous delivery


some tru lyrics dashed in here and there


this needs work

With a hotter flow, you could have pulled off this valiant effort at lyricism



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Yeah the punchez were preaty good...Not the best but good...And much respect for being able to do that cuz sometimez itz hard to get ur wordplay and punchlinez into an audip becuz ur tryin to catch the flow at the same time, so nice shit dog, keep spittin ey

feed used 1-14-06 "we jolding our own"

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