Nice drop man, graphic and simple opener. I like reading pieces that take the title and ultimately creat a nice concept out of it rather than the obvious. The only thing I didnt like would be the way it was written. Maybe thats your style, I dont know, but it was half way annoying. However, the piece as a whole flowed well, had great imagery in places, vocab was the norm.

Not really a piece that got me thinking and actually enjoying the write up until the last 2 lines. You drove the nail home with them, nice job man.

About what was annoying me, the run-on's. Some areas lacked conjunctions that are vital in my opinion and not to be sacraficed for flow or structure.

Keep it up man, & thanks for the feed.

Peace.

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