Nice concept man, vocab was abundant, flow was good, though it fell off in a spot or two in my opinion. A few areas seemed forced to me aswell.

Best lines:
"Stashed underground a little taste of hypocracy from deaths sounds
how profound but proud to die a peice of shit, but thats being steep
6 feet deep, wrists slit from the ankles to the teeth, breathed in poisons "

Keep the OM's comin' man. Appreciate it if you rtf on Blow It in my sig bro.

Peace.

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