AW MAN NOT RAP IT WAS GOOD YOU STARTED OF RAPPING WITH THESE MULTI-RHYMING LINES THEN YOU FELL OFF THIS PART WAS GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

i woke up walked down the steps
little did i know i would sharley regret
early i met my chest to a dagger
reaching for the ledge as i mysteriously stagger
down each of the stairs vision impered justly i stared
at a knife turned around quickly & swiftly ended a life
the life i ended was indeed the life of my wife
quickly i ran to the phone picking up amo like that gangsta capone

AND I THINK THIS IS WHAT THE MODERATERS SHOULD BE DOING HELPING PEOPLE INSTEAD OF MOVING POSTS AND TELLING THEM TO DROP LINKS