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Old 01-18-06, 10:20 PM   #4
Triple_N
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ok typing as I listen.......beat is very amateurish sounding......u opened wit hook but it didn't really have a catch phrase that really HOOKED me in....u was lacking that major factor in ya hook.......flow is decent...its shaky in spots....an its basic in general...coulda changed it up.....second dude I wasnt feeling his voice or delivery but his flow was decent.......all in all this was a subpar track IMO..no hate jus coulda been alot better especially as a club track biggest thing is the HOOK an u feel short there to me........anyways keep dropping....stay up........1
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